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英语作文求修改,大神过来瞧一瞧,学吊一个
I am a writer
When I was young,writing subject is must be learnt.At that time,I didn’t know whatwriting is and how to write.But it is my homework,I have to finish it andhand it in on time.One day,my teacher told me myarticles were better than otherstudents.She hoped me take part in a writing competition.And I accepted.Atlast,I won the competition.From that time,I love writing.
Because of that competition,I have a dream is to be awriter.For writing good articles,I always read some articles wrote by the famous writers.All things come tothose who ready,finally I become a writer now.
I am a writer
When I was young,writing subject is must be learnt.At that time,I didn’t know whatwriting is and how to write.But it is my homework,I have to finish it andhand it in on time.One day,my teacher told me myarticles were better than otherstudents.She hoped me take part in a writing competition.And I accepted.Atlast,I won the competition.From that time,I love writing.
Because of that competition,I have a dream is to be awriter.For writing good articles,I always read some articles wrote by the famous writers.All things come tothose who ready,finally I become a writer now.
writing subject is must 把is去了,后面已经有 must了
hand it in on time.应该是hand on上交
She hoped me take part in最好是从句she hopes that i can take ..
And I accepted后面应该有it accept是及物动词
Because of that competition 最好用it代替competition
,I have a dream is to be awriter.把is去了
hand it in on time.应该是hand on上交
She hoped me take part in最好是从句she hopes that i can take ..
And I accepted后面应该有it accept是及物动词
Because of that competition 最好用it代替competition
,I have a dream is to be awriter.把is去了