搜搜做题作业网谁能帮我改一下这篇英语文章!
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谁能帮我改一下这篇英语文章!
Dear Peter,
I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well.
There are some advice for you .fristly,you can take a Chinese course to improve you Chinese skill.secondly,it’s usefull to read Chinese magazine and TV show,because it’s good to leave you in Chinese enviroment.Apart from these,singing Chinese songs is a good idea and make some Chinese friends.
Finally ,speaking loudly is important key.
Wiating for you good news,
Dear Peter,
I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well.
There are some advice for you .fristly,you can take a Chinese course to improve you Chinese skill.secondly,it’s usefull to read Chinese magazine and TV show,because it’s good to leave you in Chinese enviroment.Apart from these,singing Chinese songs is a good idea and make some Chinese friends.
Finally ,speaking loudly is important key.
Wiating for you good news,
you can take a Chinese course to improve you Chinese skill.第二个有改为your,
first 用firstly是没问题的,很多人都是这样,
it’s usefull to read Chinese magazine and TV show,useful后加for you 会好一点,不加也可以.you could try to read Chinese magazine and watch TV show in order to make you in Chinese Learning Environment.这句跟你自己那句是差不多的.
speaking loudly is important key,is后应该加an.the important thing is to speak loudly ,这句也是跟你的差不多
first 用firstly是没问题的,很多人都是这样,
it’s usefull to read Chinese magazine and TV show,useful后加for you 会好一点,不加也可以.you could try to read Chinese magazine and watch TV show in order to make you in Chinese Learning Environment.这句跟你自己那句是差不多的.
speaking loudly is important key,is后应该加an.the important thing is to speak loudly ,这句也是跟你的差不多