搜搜做题作业网两篇英语稿,求帮忙修改啊、、在线等
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两篇英语稿,求帮忙修改啊、、在线等
My outlook stories
Hello, everyone, It was the first time that I took part in such a formal competition .After layers of selection, I finally standing in the final stage.
There was a incident among the competition .After the quarter –final, I clicked on the final list of players with a expectant, nervous heart. Suddenly, a pot of cold water splashed, I was not in the list.
The score of the student who in the bottom of the list is 83.33,just 0.23 points higher than me ,0.23points ,I thought I’d missed the finals .
As I comfort myself that “focus on participation ” ,the teacher in Organizing Committee called me and told me that I am promotion ,with just 0.23points gap and the top of candidates , I received the chance to enter the finals.
I treasure this chance because it’s hard-won, I will be more hard to return parents’ support, classmates’ encourage and teacher’s belief .
My outlook stories
Hello, everyone, It was the first time that I took part in such a formal competition .After layers of selection, I finally standing in the final stage.
There was a incident among the competition .After the quarter –final, I clicked on the final list of players with a expectant, nervous heart. Suddenly, a pot of cold water splashed, I was not in the list.
The score of the student who in the bottom of the list is 83.33,just 0.23 points higher than me ,0.23points ,I thought I’d missed the finals .
As I comfort myself that “focus on participation ” ,the teacher in Organizing Committee called me and told me that I am promotion ,with just 0.23points gap and the top of candidates , I received the chance to enter the finals.
I treasure this chance because it’s hard-won, I will be more hard to return parents’ support, classmates’ encourage and teacher’s belief .
My outlook stories
Hello,everyone it is the first time that I take part in such a formal competition.After layers of selection,I finally standing in the final stage.
There was an incident between the competition.After the quarter -final,I clicked on the final list of players with an expectant,nervous heart.Suddenly,a pot of cold water splashed,my name was not on the list.
The score of the student who in the bottom of the list is 83.33,just 0.23 points higher than me ,0.23points,I thought I'd miss the finals.
As I comfort myself that "focus on participation "the teacher in organizing committee called me and told me that I am promotion,with just 0.23points gap and the top of candidates,I received the chance to enter the finals.
I treasure this chance because it's hard-won,I will be more hard to return to parents' support,classmates' encouraging and teacher's belief.
再问： 可不可以就整篇稿子给我提些建议呢？
再答： 就可能口语化写吧 大的错误倒是还好 就我个人觉得表达可以更简洁利落些
再问： 不知道怎么改(＞﹏＜)明天就要演讲了，果断求帮忙
Hello,everyone it is the first time that I take part in such a formal competition.After layers of selection,I finally standing in the final stage.
There was an incident between the competition.After the quarter -final,I clicked on the final list of players with an expectant,nervous heart.Suddenly,a pot of cold water splashed,my name was not on the list.
The score of the student who in the bottom of the list is 83.33,just 0.23 points higher than me ,0.23points,I thought I'd miss the finals.
As I comfort myself that "focus on participation "the teacher in organizing committee called me and told me that I am promotion,with just 0.23points gap and the top of candidates,I received the chance to enter the finals.
I treasure this chance because it's hard-won,I will be more hard to return to parents' support,classmates' encouraging and teacher's belief.
再问： 可不可以就整篇稿子给我提些建议呢？
再答： 就可能口语化写吧 大的错误倒是还好 就我个人觉得表达可以更简洁利落些
再问： 不知道怎么改(＞﹏＜)明天就要演讲了，果断求帮忙