搜搜做题作业网请帮我看看这段话哪里有错误并且帮我改正一下
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请帮我看看这段话哪里有错误并且帮我改正一下
If I can choose to how to die, I want to imitate of him,then I can know who loves me,who really care about me.
But I can't see these
So,
I am not pleased now
If my name will appear on the baidu encyclopedia in the future
It recorded the story about my life after my death,
but,
I can not continue to use baidu.
If I can choose to how to die, I want to imitate of him,then I can know who loves me,who really care about me.
But I can't see these
So,
I am not pleased now
If my name will appear on the baidu encyclopedia in the future
It recorded the story about my life after my death,
but,
I can not continue to use baidu.
1.choose后的to去掉,2.care改为cares,3.will appear去掉will,4.recorded改为will record