搜搜做题作业网谁帮俺改一下作文啊,主要是语法错误跟中式英语06年考研小作文
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谁帮俺改一下作文啊,主要是语法错误跟中式英语06年考研小作文
Dear sir or madam,
Iam moved by the Hope Project,and simultaneously,what the project achieve bynow give me a great encouragement.Consequently,I would like to contribute mybit to Hope Project to provide financial aid to a girl in a remote area of your province.
I will be grateful if you could help me find a girl who is going to school but her family cannot afford her tuition.I have made a decision to offer her schooling until she graduate for secondary school.I would like directly to deposit some money in the bank account thather family opened in her local bank.
Yours sincerely,
LingMing.
Dear sir or madam,
Iam moved by the Hope Project,and simultaneously,what the project achieve bynow give me a great encouragement.Consequently,I would like to contribute mybit to Hope Project to provide financial aid to a girl in a remote area of your province.
I will be grateful if you could help me find a girl who is going to school but her family cannot afford her tuition.I have made a decision to offer her schooling until she graduate for secondary school.I would like directly to deposit some money in the bank account thather family opened in her local bank.
Yours sincerely,
LingMing.
Dear sir or madam,
I am moved by the Hope Project,and simultaneously,what the project has achieved so far brings me great encouragement.Therefore/Thus,I would like to devote my modest effort to Hope Project by providing financial aid for a girl in a remote area of your province.
I will be grateful if you could help me find a school-age girl whose family cannot afford her tuition and that nearly drops from school.I make a decision that I will not stop helping with her schooling until she finishes her elementary education.I plan to remit to her family's savings account issued by the local bank directly.
Yours sincerely,
LingMing
整体看起来,你的文章句子过于繁冗,不少地方的语句表达不地道,很多地方我已替你改了,
I am moved by the Hope Project,and simultaneously,what the project has achieved so far brings me great encouragement.Therefore/Thus,I would like to devote my modest effort to Hope Project by providing financial aid for a girl in a remote area of your province.
I will be grateful if you could help me find a school-age girl whose family cannot afford her tuition and that nearly drops from school.I make a decision that I will not stop helping with her schooling until she finishes her elementary education.I plan to remit to her family's savings account issued by the local bank directly.
Yours sincerely,
LingMing
整体看起来,你的文章句子过于繁冗,不少地方的语句表达不地道,很多地方我已替你改了,