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My view on college students' take part-time job
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1 Nowadays more and more people voice growing concern over college students' taking part-time jobs.Some people agrue that it isunquestionably beneficial to the students in that it can enlarge their horizon and enrich their experince.While others firmly hold that part-time jobs of all kinds are harmful so as to hinder the students'normal college study.
Personally,I think this question should be probed in depth .on the one hand ,the first groupis not totally correct because not all part-time jobs are beneficial and not harmful.Students are somewhat immature and easily led astray by those money-addicted employers.On the other hand,the second opinion seems not so satisfactory becaus we also witness successful examples in univeisities home and abroad.Early working experience can be invaluable as the preparation for future career.
From what has been discussed above,we can see clearly that the key lies in whether the student in focus is able to strike a succesful balance between work and study.Otherwise,the college life will be caught in the so-called vicious circle no matter whether the student takes part-time jobs or not
2 Nowadays more and more people voice growing concern over college students' taking part-time jobs.Some people agrue that it isunquestionably beneficial to the students in that it can enlarge their horizon and enrich their experince.While others firmly hold that part-time jobs of all kinds are harmful so as to hinder the students'normal college study.
Personally,I think this question should be probed in depth .on the one hand ,the first groupis not totally correct because not all part-time jobs are beneficial and not harmful.Students are somewhat immature and easily led astray by those money-addicted employers.On the other hand,the second opinion seems not so satisfactory because we also witness successful examples in univeisities home and abroad.Early working experience can be invaluable as the preparation for future career.