一篇英语改错，求解答Recently I have heard the news that an art exhibit

一篇英语改错，求解答
Recently I have heard the news that an art exhibition will be held and you have collecting suggestions about where to hold — in Shanghai Museum or in community libraries.I am writing to share time with you.
Personally speaking,it is better to hold the art exhibiton in Shanghai Museum than in community libraries.My reason are as follows.
First of alll.Shanghai Museum,is located in the center of the city,will be more convenient for people to get there.In addition,the museum had more space and canprovide more comfortable place for visitors to appreciate of art.Most importantly,Shanghai Museum is more professional and experience in holding art exhibitons.It can provide more professional and advanced facilities,that can help keep the exhibiton run better.
Thus,I strongly recommend that it can be held in the museum,

Recently I 【heard 】the news that an art exhibition 【would】 be held and you 【had been】 collecting suggestions about where to hold — in Shanghai Museum or in community libraries. I am writing to share 【my opinion】 with you.
Personally speaking,it is better to hold the art exhibiton in Shanghai Museum than in community libraries.My reason are as follows.
First of alll.Shanghai Museum,【 located】 in the center of the city, 【is】 more convenient for people to get there. In addition,the museum 【has】 more space and can provide 【a】 more comfortable place for visitors to appreciate of art. Most importantly,Shanghai Museum is more professional and 【has more】 experience in holding art exhibitons. It can provide more professional and advanced facilities, that can 【make】 the exhibiton run better.
Thus,I strongly recommend that it can be held in the museum.
最近我听到一个艺术展览会举行新闻和你已经收集建议在哪里举行-上海博物馆或社区图书馆。我写我的意见与你分享。就个人而言，它是在上海博物馆举办的艺术展在社区图书馆更好。我的理由如下。首先所有。上海博物馆，位于在城市的中心，是人们获取那里更方便。此外，博物馆有更多的空间和提供一个更舒适的地方供游客欣赏艺术。最重要的是，上海博物馆更专业和有举办艺术展览更多经验。它可以提供更为专业和先进的设施，可以使展览运行得更好。因此，我强烈建议可以在博物馆举行.
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