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求英语作文批改Dear Paul,I'm Joy,and Iwant to introduce my lifestyle

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求英语作文批改
Dear Paul,
I'm Joy,and Iwant to introduce my lifestyle for you.
Although I am very busy sometimes,I( still) think I have much spare time to do things I like.I get up at 6 o'clock in the morning and I go to my office in the hospital,you can (image) that I am a doctor.It is a little hard for me to work 5 hours every morning.After lunch I spend two hours in the park near the hospital.However,I should work 3 hours before I go home.And I often sleep very late because I always watch TV for a long time.
This is my lifestyle,I like my job very much.Would you like to share your lifestyle with me?
Yours,
Joy
括号里的是老师给画的有问题的地方,但是不知道为什么错了,
求英语作文批改Dear Paul,I'm Joy,and Iwant to introduce my lifestyle
image的意思是影像,我想你本来是想用imagine吧,应该是you can imagine,关于still就不知道了,不好意思.