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急!帮忙改篇英语作文谢谢,明天晚上之前要.谢谢!
Nowadays more and more students have opportunity to go to university; many of them look forward to having a relaxing college life. Therefore it is common to see a lazy student is late for classes, leave early even don’t attend the class in campus.
It is necessary to improve the attendance rate. As we all know college is a place where you can not only learn much more knowledge, but also realize how to survive in the competitive society. If you learned nothing in the college, you would take a heavy toll in future. At the same time the attendance rate is also play a vital role in the education.
As a college student we must ensure that we can attend the classes. On the other hand, we should help others keep out of absenting the classes. Only in this way you will not regret what you have done when you graduate from university.
In a word, if you want have a wonderful future, you should pay more when you in college.
Nowadays more and more students have opportunity to go to university; many of them look forward to having a relaxing college life. Therefore it is common to see a lazy student is late for classes, leave early even don’t attend the class in campus.
It is necessary to improve the attendance rate. As we all know college is a place where you can not only learn much more knowledge, but also realize how to survive in the competitive society. If you learned nothing in the college, you would take a heavy toll in future. At the same time the attendance rate is also play a vital role in the education.
As a college student we must ensure that we can attend the classes. On the other hand, we should help others keep out of absenting the classes. Only in this way you will not regret what you have done when you graduate from university.
In a word, if you want have a wonderful future, you should pay more when you in college.
opportunity 前面加the
them 改为 whcih,非限制性定语从句.
therefore 后面加“,”
in campus 改为 on campus
absenting 改为being absent from
you will 改为 will you,Only 在句首,用倒装
if you want,want 后面加to
you are in college,you后面加are
文章写得不错,观点阐述明确,逻辑连贯.
them 改为 whcih,非限制性定语从句.
therefore 后面加“,”
in campus 改为 on campus
absenting 改为being absent from
you will 改为 will you,Only 在句首,用倒装
if you want,want 后面加to
you are in college,you后面加are
文章写得不错,观点阐述明确,逻辑连贯.
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