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帮忙改下英语作文（很容易,完成后会加分）
My Happy Travelling
I traveled to Hong Kong with my parents during my winter holiday in 2007.We went there by plane.Once arriving,we went to the Disneyland,and there were many good interesting things to make us have fun.Then we visited the Ocean Park.It was so beautiful .Meanwhile,we were attracted by many supermarkets there,so we had bought many fashionable clothes and special souvenirs.We had stayed there around two weeks.Hong Kong is a great place to travel.It left a deep impression to me.
就是上面这篇文 麻烦会的亲帮我改成去上海的（把上海的著名景点换进去就行）改出来没什么错我会再加十分
My Happy Travelling
I traveled to Hong Kong with my parents during my winter holiday in 2007.We went there by plane.Once arriving,we went to the Disneyland,and there were many good interesting things to make us have fun.Then we visited the Ocean Park.It was so beautiful .Meanwhile,we were attracted by many supermarkets there,so we had bought many fashionable clothes and special souvenirs.We had stayed there around two weeks.Hong Kong is a great place to travel.It left a deep impression to me.
就是上面这篇文 麻烦会的亲帮我改成去上海的（把上海的著名景点换进去就行）改出来没什么错我会再加十分
My Happy Travelling
I traveled Shanghai with my parents during my winter holiday in 2009.We went there by air.Once we arrived in Shanghai ,we went to the Disneyland,and there were many good interesting things to make us happy.Then we visited the people's square .It was so beautiful .And we were also attracted by many supermarkets there,so we had bought many fashionable clothes and special souvenirs.We had been in there around two weeks.Shanghai is a great place to travel.It moved me a lot.
2009 年11月,迪士尼乐园正式落户上海.
I traveled Shanghai with my parents during my winter holiday in 2009.We went there by air.Once we arrived in Shanghai ,we went to the Disneyland,and there were many good interesting things to make us happy.Then we visited the people's square .It was so beautiful .And we were also attracted by many supermarkets there,so we had bought many fashionable clothes and special souvenirs.We had been in there around two weeks.Shanghai is a great place to travel.It moved me a lot.
2009 年11月,迪士尼乐园正式落户上海.