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Today,I read the sun sister wrote " not lonely ",a book has not read!Cry me all that noise.
This book is an angel with only one wing Zhang Xiaowei!Sun sister said:" parents are children 's wings,family handicapped child!Becomes the angel wing!"
In fact,I quite sympathize with Zhang Xiaowei!He was not the father,live in broken families,in schools,and students are not harmonious,girls on his argument.At home,facing the mother demanding conditions and mother exaggerated show.
I like Zhang Xiaowei to reveal her life experience!Very touching!Zhang Xiaowei said:" we are all angels with single wing,only to embrace each other in order to fly.Learn to love,learn to care,learn tolerance,we will have the most powerful wings!We could fly so high!" Say on!I wonder if you have heard this statement:" God close a door in front of you at the same time,also will open a window for you!" Even though you lost a wing,you premature attempt the fate of the bitter,but,at the same time you also got a lot.For example:you learn to reflect on their own,learn to be strong,learn to struggle with the fate of!This is also the angel wing of happiness!
Is an angel with only one wing of the students!You know!Before we were born,the world is an apple tree,and we are a apple.But that is because there are some apples really cute!God could not help but bite!Bite the apple,become a person,there will be some ups and downs in life!They became the angel wing!
God is not selfish,he gave each people all is fair!Angels wing!Want to believe!You are not only pain,and strong!
Today,I read the sun sister wrote " not lonely ",a book has not read!Cry me all that noise.
This book is an angel with only one wing Zhang Xiaowei!Sun sister said:" parents are children 's wings,family handicapped child!Becomes the angel wing!"
In fact,I quite sympathize with Zhang Xiaowei!He was not the father,live in broken families,in schools,and students are not harmonious,girls on his argument.At home,facing the mother demanding conditions and mother exaggerated show.
I like Zhang Xiaowei to reveal her life experience!Very touching!Zhang Xiaowei said:" we are all angels with single wing,only to embrace each other in order to fly.Learn to love,learn to care,learn tolerance,we will have the most powerful wings!We could fly so high!" Say on!I wonder if you have heard this statement:" God close a door in front of you at the same time,also will open a window for you!" Even though you lost a wing,you premature attempt the fate of the bitter,but,at the same time you also got a lot.For example:you learn to reflect on their own,learn to be strong,learn to struggle with the fate of!This is also the angel wing of happiness!
Is an angel with only one wing of the students!You know!Before we were born,the world is an apple tree,and we are a apple.But that is because there are some apples really cute!God could not help but bite!Bite the apple,become a person,there will be some ups and downs in life!They became the angel wing!
God is not selfish,he gave each people all is fair!Angels wing!Want to believe!You are not only pain,and strong!
你能把中文原意一并写出来吗?因太多句不成句.看不懂其意.你把中文原意一并写出来,我才能改英文.
再问： 额……你看不懂英文？
再答： 看不懂不是英文句子的英文.
再问： 额……你看不懂英文？
再答： 看不懂不是英文句子的英文.