以30分为基准请老师评分
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Recently, I have made a trip to the USA. Then, I find there're a lot of differences between our native education and American eudcation. Compared with the study lasting three years in China,the Amerizcan students need another one year to graduate. During the senior study,most Chinese students do their best to lay a strong foundation of knowledgr which is mainly acquired from teachers and classes.However,American students are frequently found in the labrary or surfing the Internet for moreuseful information,and they just spend 8.5 hours every day,as a result,they're lively and good at activities organized by themselves.on the other hand,in China,extra curricular activities are always organised by teachers,and most of them often become tired after ten hours study.In addition,Chinese students have no choice but study in fixed classroom,while in the USA it is free for every one to choose favourite classes.
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你的这篇作文应该是第五档的作文,也就是很好的一篇作文,分数差不多在25-30分 之间。 •优点: —应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。 —语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误,但为尽力使用较复杂结构或高级词汇所致;具有较强的语言运用能力。 —有效地使用了句间的连接成份,使全文结构紧凑。 完全达到了预期的写作目的。 缺点:里面有一些小的错误, 我的改正仅供参考。 1. the American students need another one year to graduate 2.most Chinese students do their best to lay a strong foundation of knowledge which is mainly acquired from teachers and classes. 3.extra curricular activities are always organized by teachers,and most of them often become tired after ten hours' study. 4.Chinese students have no choice but tostudy in fixed classroom,while in the USA it is free for everyone to choose favourite classes 很高兴为你解答问题,如本题还有不懂的地方,可在添加讨论中继续发问,我会尽快给你回复的,努力吧!你一定会学得更好的!
最终答案:略
解题过程:
你的这篇作文应该是第五档的作文,也就是很好的一篇作文,分数差不多在25-30分 之间。 •优点: —应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。 —语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误,但为尽力使用较复杂结构或高级词汇所致;具有较强的语言运用能力。 —有效地使用了句间的连接成份,使全文结构紧凑。 完全达到了预期的写作目的。 缺点:里面有一些小的错误, 我的改正仅供参考。 1. the American students need another one year to graduate 2.most Chinese students do their best to lay a strong foundation of knowledge which is mainly acquired from teachers and classes. 3.extra curricular activities are always organized by teachers,and most of them often become tired after ten hours' study. 4.Chinese students have no choice but tostudy in fixed classroom,while in the USA it is free for everyone to choose favourite classes 很高兴为你解答问题,如本题还有不懂的地方,可在添加讨论中继续发问,我会尽快给你回复的,努力吧!你一定会学得更好的!
最终答案:略
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