搜搜做题作业网请各位英语水平比较好的,帮我修改一下下面的作文··谢谢,球急速,我后天就要用了,
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请各位英语水平比较好的,帮我修改一下下面的作文··谢谢,球急速,我后天就要用了,
My iodl
My idol is not what big star,big star or something,but a scientists-Albert Einstein.
Einstein was a great scientist,but his intelligence and not innate.It is said that he had not an outstanding student,can why he would be a great scientist,the reason is that he's a successful formula:success = diligence + correct method + less empty talk.
Previously,Einstein special stupid,even words all speak bad,hair should be very slow,often be the teacher reprimand angrily.Teachers and principals will all think he always can't do something.But Einstein grew up,with his success formula,make him from a dull boy guy into a science giant of the world.
He once proposed a "theory of relativity",the 1921 Nobel Prize for physics,intelligence is as high as 160 points
I think,a person is not clever is not terrible,terrible is to let out the angry with myself,as long as Ken for target do hard work,and cooperate with the correct method,would be a success.
My iodl
My idol is not what big star,big star or something,but a scientists-Albert Einstein.
Einstein was a great scientist,but his intelligence and not innate.It is said that he had not an outstanding student,can why he would be a great scientist,the reason is that he's a successful formula:success = diligence + correct method + less empty talk.
Previously,Einstein special stupid,even words all speak bad,hair should be very slow,often be the teacher reprimand angrily.Teachers and principals will all think he always can't do something.But Einstein grew up,with his success formula,make him from a dull boy guy into a science giant of the world.
He once proposed a "theory of relativity",the 1921 Nobel Prize for physics,intelligence is as high as 160 points
I think,a person is not clever is not terrible,terrible is to let out the angry with myself,as long as Ken for target do hard work,and cooperate with the correct method,would be a success.
My idol
My idol isn't a super star or any else,it was a famous scientist___Albert Einstein.
Einstein was a great scientist who was get along with.He wasn't a outstanding student when he was a kid.so why did he can become a well-known scientist and get the achievements?It's depend on himself,he has said a successful formula:success = diligence + correct method + less empty talk.
he couldn't speak clearly and always scolded by the teacher even his classmates also looked down upon him when he was young.Teachers and principals were all think he always can't do anything successful.But he succeeded virtue of his own effort and self-confidence while he growing up.
Finally he awarded Nobel Prize of physics in 1921 and his intelligence is as high as 160 points(also it's not the point)
I think it doesn't matter if you are not clever,the terrible thing is that you don't have enough confidence,determination and resolution.I enjoy his good moral character and he is my idol forever!
再问： 没问题了？？
再答： 麻烦赶紧做选择 大家都是辛辛苦苦花时间改的！ 顺便提一下 我把你的结构改得有点多 表介意
My idol isn't a super star or any else,it was a famous scientist___Albert Einstein.
Einstein was a great scientist who was get along with.He wasn't a outstanding student when he was a kid.so why did he can become a well-known scientist and get the achievements?It's depend on himself,he has said a successful formula:success = diligence + correct method + less empty talk.
he couldn't speak clearly and always scolded by the teacher even his classmates also looked down upon him when he was young.Teachers and principals were all think he always can't do anything successful.But he succeeded virtue of his own effort and self-confidence while he growing up.
Finally he awarded Nobel Prize of physics in 1921 and his intelligence is as high as 160 points(also it's not the point)
I think it doesn't matter if you are not clever,the terrible thing is that you don't have enough confidence,determination and resolution.I enjoy his good moral character and he is my idol forever!
再问： 没问题了？？
再答： 麻烦赶紧做选择 大家都是辛辛苦苦花时间改的！ 顺便提一下 我把你的结构改得有点多 表介意
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