英语短文修改Good morning,everyone!I’m Peng Yao in 11 stage art des

英语短文修改
Good morning,everyone!I’m Peng Yao in 11 stage art design undergraduate class 14.The topic of my speech today is on the car.
With the improvement of living standards,many families have bought private cars.But with the increase of the number of cars,negative problems brought about by more and more.What could you like us to do?This is what I will want to discuss with you the problem.
First of all,I put forward my opinion,and then I will ask you about this.First,bring great convenience of private cars to travel.For example,place of work far away from home,walking,or riding may not rush past.Lead to late,cause a lot of trouble.So,many people have bought private cars.To solve the problem of traffic.But with the increase of private cars,then there is the problem of heavy traffic.In addition,but also cause environmental pollution problems.So instead of run counter to one's desire.So I came up with some solutions.First,for those in the upper income families,want to buy a car can also be.However,it is best to buy fuel consumption of smaller size,also cannot too big.This will not only reduce the damage to the environment.Saving to buy oil money,but parking is also very easy.Second,avoid or stagger the peak passenger flow.During such as commuting,very easy to cause traffic congestion phenomenon.You can early to work,or work late,or,to take the bus to work.This can save time,can also travel convenience for others.
Then everyone on the car what suggestions can be put forward.
Thank you.I finished the speech.

Good morning,everyone!I’m Peng Yao in class 14 of artdesign.The topic of my speech today is private car.With the improvement of
living standards,many families have bought
private cars.However,the increasing amount of cars has brought more and more
negative problems.Therefore,what can we do?This is what I want to discuss
with you today.I will put forward my opinion first,and then ask yours about
this.It is convenience for us to go somewhere by our own cars.For example,if
the work place is far from our homes,it will cause a lot of trouble without a
car because it is too slow to walk,ride a bike or get on a bus which will make
us late for work.So,many people have bought private cars to solve the problem.
But the increase of private cars leads to the heavy traffic then,which also
causes the environmental pollution problems.So instead of running counter to our
desire,I came up with some solutions.First,those who has income and want to
buy a car,they can do so,but they are better to buy a smaller car with lower fuel
consumption.This will not only reduce the damage to the environment,but also
save the money of buying gasoline.What’s more,it will be easier to park the
car.Second,the driver should avoid the rush hour.If you haven’t a car,you
can go to work earlier,which can keep away from the heavy traffic.
Then everyone can be put forward your idea about the privatecar.
Thank you.