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帮忙修改下英文演讲稿,.标注下哪里有语法错误.
Hello everyone,my name is LengPinwen.I’m gold to stand on here Today.I want to talking about friendship.
Friendship is an important part of our life.Everyone needs friends.But how to keep friendship?Friendship isn’t always easily kept.When you want to keep a friend,you should treat her like you her secrets ,because she trusts you .Keep your promise with your friend.Share things with your friend.Stick up for your friend.When your friend is in trouble,you must help her.
I have a true friend.We met each other two years ago.we are not at the same school nor the same city.We talk on the telephone ,on the Internet and we write letters.When I have problems,I will ask her to halp me .Though we do not meet very often ,we keep our friendship very well.when you meet a true friend ,please give you true heart to her!That’s all.Thank you!
Hello everyone,my name is LengPinwen.I’m gold to stand on here Today.I want to talking about friendship.
Friendship is an important part of our life.Everyone needs friends.But how to keep friendship?Friendship isn’t always easily kept.When you want to keep a friend,you should treat her like you her secrets ,because she trusts you .Keep your promise with your friend.Share things with your friend.Stick up for your friend.When your friend is in trouble,you must help her.
I have a true friend.We met each other two years ago.we are not at the same school nor the same city.We talk on the telephone ,on the Internet and we write letters.When I have problems,I will ask her to halp me .Though we do not meet very often ,we keep our friendship very well.when you meet a true friend ,please give you true heart to her!That’s all.Thank you!
I’m gold to stand on here Today
此句中的 on 应去掉.
I want to talking about friendship.
talking 应改为 talk
Friendship is an important part of our life.
去掉 of
Friendship isn’t always easily kept
应改为 easily to keep
you should treat her like you her secrets ,
此句逻辑有错.你是不是想表达：你应该把她当做彼此共同的秘密?如果是这样的话,因该是：you should treat her like the secret of both of you.
Keep your promise with your friend
这句话前面应加 So
We met each other two years ago
可以把met 换为 knew,突出认识
on the Internet
建议换成 by the Internet,因为前面已经出现on 了
When I have problems, I will ask her to halp me .
可以换成：she is here to help me .您的这句话太中文式了.
please give you true
your true heart
总体来说,还是不错哦!
希望能帮助到你,Good Luck!
此句中的 on 应去掉.
I want to talking about friendship.
talking 应改为 talk
Friendship is an important part of our life.
去掉 of
Friendship isn’t always easily kept
应改为 easily to keep
you should treat her like you her secrets ,
此句逻辑有错.你是不是想表达：你应该把她当做彼此共同的秘密?如果是这样的话,因该是：you should treat her like the secret of both of you.
Keep your promise with your friend
这句话前面应加 So
We met each other two years ago
可以把met 换为 knew,突出认识
on the Internet
建议换成 by the Internet,因为前面已经出现on 了
When I have problems, I will ask her to halp me .
可以换成：she is here to help me .您的这句话太中文式了.
please give you true
your true heart
总体来说,还是不错哦!
希望能帮助到你,Good Luck!