英语翻译有哪些不通顺的麻烦下大哥大姐帮忙提点建议,急着要出国面试的 很高兴见到你 我叫.,今年24岁了,我来自中国,家乡

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有哪些不通顺的麻烦下大哥大姐帮忙提点建议,急着要出国面试的 很高兴见到你 我叫.,今年24岁了,我来自中国,家乡是福建龙岩,家里有4口人,我爸爸,我妈妈,我爷爷和我,我的爱好是听音乐和运动,我对人生观基本是乐观向上,勤奋好学,这直接影响到我对人生的态度,我觉得精神满足比物质满足来的更重要,我去新加坡的原因也是因为这样我能学习到更多的知识,能看到更大的世界,往成就人生的意义的方向前行,过去我也曾经失败过,我不会掩饰,曾经在公司的聚餐会上唱过歌,那是我第一次在舞台上唱歌,因为当时紧张刚开始唱就有点走调了,你知道的,当时心里很紧张,我承认这是很受挫折打击的,接着有很多人给我鼓掌,给我精神上的支持,我重新调整状态,最后把歌曲唱好了,这次给我感触很深,要相信自己能做好.在工作中最大压力就是我喜欢接受新的挑战,当然从事新的工作,会比较缺少经验,就更需要经过缜密的思考与妥善的规划,最后完成一项工作,那种成就感令人满足又值得回味.我对工作会认认真真的做好,我很珍惜,也很希望能得到这次工作的机会,

Hello,nice to meet you! My name is...I'm 24 years old this year and come from longyan, fujian,China.There are four people in my family, my father, my mother, my grandfather and I. my hobby is listening to music and sports,my life values are optimisim and hardworking, which directly affect my attitude toward life. I think spiritual satisfaction is more important than material satisfaction, the reason I went to Singapore is that I can learn more knowledge, see the bigger world, and move ahead on the way of achieving the meaning of life. I had failed before,but I won't conceal. Once in the company's party, it is the first time I sang on stage, since I was nervous when I began to sing ,I went out of tune, you know, I was very nervous at that time, I admit that it was very frustrating, but then many people applauded for me, giving me the spiritual support, I readjusted my state and sang the song well finally. This made me have a lot of feelings, I must believe myself can do it. The maximum pressure in my work is I like to accept new challenges.And of course,when have a new job, I will be lack of experience, then I need more careful thinking and well arranged planning, and finally when you finished the proper job , the sense of achievement is satisfying and memorable. I will do my job seriously,and I really cherish it and I'm eager for this job opportunity, thank you!