搜搜做题作业网求英语高手看看这里面哪里有语法错误或不恰当的表达,
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求英语高手看看这里面哪里有语法错误或不恰当的表达,
DearMr.Tony,
I get your name and emailaddress from your trade lead on Google and Alibaba that you are in the marketfor black granite tombstones.I would like to introduce our company andproducts,hope that we may build business cooperation in the future.
My company specializing inthe manufacture and export of tombstone,temple carving,road traffic stone,washbowl and other products which were made of marble and standstone such asfireplace and floor since 1990,when my company set up.We have our own minesin many countries,for instance,China,India and South Africa,ect.So our company have many kind of ores like Shanxi Black,Mongolia Black,IndianRed,Absoulute Black and so on.And our products are very popular overseas marketslike Japan,America,Europe,etc.Because their good quality and competitive price.You are welcome to visit ourwebsite which includes our company’s profiles,history and something latest products.
If you have interest in it,please let me know,I will be happy to give you details.,it’s my pleasure tooffer news to you regular.
Bestregards:
XXXXX
DearMr.Tony,
I get your name and emailaddress from your trade lead on Google and Alibaba that you are in the marketfor black granite tombstones.I would like to introduce our company andproducts,hope that we may build business cooperation in the future.
My company specializing inthe manufacture and export of tombstone,temple carving,road traffic stone,washbowl and other products which were made of marble and standstone such asfireplace and floor since 1990,when my company set up.We have our own minesin many countries,for instance,China,India and South Africa,ect.So our company have many kind of ores like Shanxi Black,Mongolia Black,IndianRed,Absoulute Black and so on.And our products are very popular overseas marketslike Japan,America,Europe,etc.Because their good quality and competitive price.You are welcome to visit ourwebsite which includes our company’s profiles,history and something latest products.
If you have interest in it,please let me know,I will be happy to give you details.,it’s my pleasure tooffer news to you regular.
Bestregards:
XXXXX
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it's my pleasure to offer news to you regularly.reguarly修饰offe
My company is specialized in...which are made of 第二段第一句 be specialized in 专精于.
And our company 第二段倒数第四行,So改为And,或者So去掉,没有因果关系
And our products are very popular overseas/ in overseas markets 第二段倒数第三行 就用overseas,或者in overseas markets都可以
due to their good quality and competitive price 第二段倒数第二行 由于,源于
history and some latest products 第二段最后一行 some形容词,修饰products
If you are interested in our company and products,/ If you have interest with our company and products
I'd be willing to show you more details
it's my pleasure to offer news to you regularly.reguarly修饰offe