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英语短文改错,共十处D I would like to tell you something more about ou

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英语短文改错,共十处D I would like to tell you something more about our school sports meet
Dear Jim,
I would like to tell you something more about our school sports meet.It was holding on Oct.6th,it was a fine day.There were over 1000 student and teachers attended it .Wang Lin ,a student from my class won the 100-meters race.He finished the race in 12.6 seconds and broke the school record.The sports meet was really success.That was because we were all trying to do my best .Although I was not one of the winner,I was proud of that we had done
Looking forward to receive your letter
Yours,Li Ping
英语短文改错,共十处D I would like to tell you something more about ou
Dear Jim,
(首段顶格)I would like to tell you something (more去掉) about our school sports meet.It was holding(改成held,因为这是被动语态) on Oct.6th,(加and,因为这是并列分句) it was a fine day.There were over 1000 student(改成students) and teachers attended(改成attending,因为这里是主动关系而不是被动关系) it .Wang Lin ,a student from my class won the 100-meters (改成100-meter) race.He finished the race in 12.6 seconds and broke the school record.The sports meet was really(加“a”,表示一次成功) success.That was because we were all trying to do my(改成our) best .Although I was not one of the winner(改成winners,one of后接复数名词),I was proud of that(改成what,what在宾语从句里充当宾语,that引导宾语从句时不在从句中充当任何成分) we had done.
Looking forward to receive(改成receiving,因为look forward to中的to是介词) your letter.
Yours,Li Ping