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My life in senior Middle School Time goes by, I have learned in my new school for three months. I have a great time in my new school. I also made a lot of friends who were really friendly. In my new school , there are many interesting subjects, such as PE, English, history and so on. I really enjoyed them. I have a really relaxing school life, I love everything here, I can learn much knowledge here. Of course, I have my own schedual , I have four classes in the morning and then I have lunch. I also have a rest in the afternoon. After that, I have other classes in the afternoon. Then I do my homework. As you can see, my school life is really exciting. I believe that I can make great progress here in the future.
请老师给出分数，做个详细的评价，在给升华下。老师辛苦了
请老师给出分数，做个详细的评价，在给升华下。老师辛苦了
解题思路： 25分满分的话，21分
解题过程：
My life in senior Middle School Time goes by, I have learned in my new school for three months. I have a great time in my new school. I also made a lot of friends who were really friendly. 1、 这是一个句子，与后面的句子关系不明确，应该加上连词，在time前加as，“随着时间” 2、 通篇的时态是现在时，所以这里的2个过去时是错误的，应该改为have made 3、 Were改为are In my new school , there are many interesting subjects, such as PE, English, history and so on. I really enjoyed them. I have a really relaxing school life, I love everything here, I can learn much knowledge here. Of course, I have my own schedual , I have four classes in the morning and then I have lunch. I also have a rest in the afternoon. After that, I have other classes in the afternoon. Then I do my homework. 1、 同理，时态改为现在时enjoy 2、 这些句子之间都是逗号，但没有添加连词，与上一段的第一个句子属于同一个类型的错误。因此，在3个句子之间改为句号或者添加and连词。 3、 属于拼写错误，改为schedule As you can see, my school life is really exciting. I believe that I can make great progress here in the future. 描红部分是不错的用词。
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最终答案：略
解题过程：
My life in senior Middle School Time goes by, I have learned in my new school for three months. I have a great time in my new school. I also made a lot of friends who were really friendly. 1、 这是一个句子，与后面的句子关系不明确，应该加上连词，在time前加as，“随着时间” 2、 通篇的时态是现在时，所以这里的2个过去时是错误的，应该改为have made 3、 Were改为are In my new school , there are many interesting subjects, such as PE, English, history and so on. I really enjoyed them. I have a really relaxing school life, I love everything here, I can learn much knowledge here. Of course, I have my own schedual , I have four classes in the morning and then I have lunch. I also have a rest in the afternoon. After that, I have other classes in the afternoon. Then I do my homework. 1、 同理，时态改为现在时enjoy 2、 这些句子之间都是逗号，但没有添加连词，与上一段的第一个句子属于同一个类型的错误。因此，在3个句子之间改为句号或者添加and连词。 3、 属于拼写错误，改为schedule As you can see, my school life is really exciting. I believe that I can make great progress here in the future. 描红部分是不错的用词。
如对本题解答还有疑问，可在“继续讨论”中留言，我收到后会尽快给你答复。谢谢你的配合！匆忙中难免有疏漏，请多包涵哦。我是菁菁草老师，随时为你答疑解惑!
最终答案：略