求英语作文my view on the london olympic opening ceremony,实在不知道怎么下

求英语作文my view on the london olympic opening ceremony,实在不知道怎么下笔,

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The London Olympic has just finished.Though there were some disadvantages on this Olympic games,it's still a well-held game in general.in my view,the most unforgettable part was the opening ceremony.
This opening ceremony impressed the people for its fantastic beginning and exciting music.Then there came lots of dancings and songs.People released their energy and joy in the music.I found there are some programs which were prepared for kids.That's what we should learn because I didn't see any prgram in Beijing Olmpics.In this Olympics ,people can feel the innocence of childhood,the excitement of youth,the ambition of adults,the intelligence of oldness.
After those performances,Olmpic torch was brought to London.Every audience clapped their hands for its coming.When it finally lighted up the Olmpic flame,everyone couldn't help cheering for it!But after a few days ,the Olmpic flame was extincted when moving!That was the biggest pity in London Olmpic games.
Next is the athletes parading.All the sportsmen walked in the sports field in order.When I saw chinese athletes walking in ,I felt proud of them!They are our national heros!
Having finished watching the opening ceremony,I could't calm down for a long time.In this Olympics I had learnt a lot.London Olympics was an Olmpic games which had both advantages and shortages!
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