短文改错二When I first learned to write in English ,I ran into ma

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When I first learned to write in English ,I ran into many 11 -------
difficulties .The main problem was in that i always thougt 12 -------
in Chinese and tried to translate anything into English .13 ---------
My teather advised me to keep my diary,i followed her 14 ---------
advice and should put down 100 words or so each day 15 ---------
Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself on paper as I was 16 -----------
learning to express me in simple English .One day i wrote 17 ----------
a little story and showed to my teacher .She liked it 18 ----------
very muh and reads it to the class .All said the story was 19 -----------
a good one.Their word were a great encouragement to me 20 ----------
三
Sleep ,as we know ,is important to us .So 21 --------
how long sleep do we actually need?22 ---------
For most of us ,eight hours seem to be about 23 ----------
the right number ,Yet we know that there are a 24 ----------
great many of people wh get alone perfectly with 25 -----------
less sleep,and some may even need more .A great 26 ----------
deal dpends by the way we live .But a good 27 --------
common rule to follow ist sleep as long as 28 ---------
we have to in order to feel happy and able to 29 --------
work at your best when w wake 30 ----------

11.正确
12.in that--that
13.anything--everything
14.my diary--a diary
15.should put--put
16.talk--talking
17.me--myself
18.showed--showed it
19.reads--read
20.word--words
21.So--But
22.long--much
23.seem--seems
24.number--amount
25.去掉of,alone--along
26.some--some who
27.by--on
28.ist--is to
29.able--be able
30.your--our,w--we