搜搜做题作业网小学5年级下学期英语作文（检查错误）
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小学5年级下学期英语作文（检查错误）
大家好,我是一名五年级小学生,我的英语老师留了一篇题目为（my friends）的英语作文,我不知写的怎么样,但是我已经尽力了.
I have a great many friends. Friends are very important for me. when I wasn't able to accomplish my homework, I'll ask for my homework from them.
I think that friends are needed by their friends. and the friendship that is a gorgeous line from a person and another one.
I have been enjoying such a amazing thing that has made friends for a long time.
Mr. Carnegie's (Andrew Carnegie) book told me that,‘ Friendship was so important in my life’.
Anyway If anyone were my friends, I'll be very happy and if you have some friends, your heart will be warm inside. If you have any horrible things, you could share to your friends.
大家好,我是一名五年级小学生,我的英语老师留了一篇题目为（my friends）的英语作文,我不知写的怎么样,但是我已经尽力了.
I have a great many friends. Friends are very important for me. when I wasn't able to accomplish my homework, I'll ask for my homework from them.
I think that friends are needed by their friends. and the friendship that is a gorgeous line from a person and another one.
I have been enjoying such a amazing thing that has made friends for a long time.
Mr. Carnegie's (Andrew Carnegie) book told me that,‘ Friendship was so important in my life’.
Anyway If anyone were my friends, I'll be very happy and if you have some friends, your heart will be warm inside. If you have any horrible things, you could share to your friends.
第一行 I have a great number of friends
第二行 I'll ask them for homework solutions
第三行 And friendship is a... 后半句你想说什么?
对于五年级来说写的不错了 少年
再问： 您好，感谢您的回答。那个句子我想形容 友谊是一条连接一个人和另一个人的华丽的线。 题外话 请问一下如果作文满分是30分，这篇大概是多少分，怎么改可以改成满分？
再答： And friendship is a gorgeous line connects from one person to another. 我要是你老师给你28吧 改的话 有个明确的总结性结尾 然后你有些话虽说没语法错误但不是很通顺
再问： 总之太谢谢了您了！ 再问一个题外话，我对目前我所接受的英语教育水平有点厌烦了，请问如果我去接受PETS 2考试通过机率大吗？
再答： 我没概念 对我来说太久远了 不过你要是这篇作文连单词都没查就写出来这样的话已经比同年学生水平高出很多了
第二行 I'll ask them for homework solutions
第三行 And friendship is a... 后半句你想说什么?
对于五年级来说写的不错了 少年
再问： 您好，感谢您的回答。那个句子我想形容 友谊是一条连接一个人和另一个人的华丽的线。 题外话 请问一下如果作文满分是30分，这篇大概是多少分，怎么改可以改成满分？
再答： And friendship is a gorgeous line connects from one person to another. 我要是你老师给你28吧 改的话 有个明确的总结性结尾 然后你有些话虽说没语法错误但不是很通顺
再问： 总之太谢谢了您了！ 再问一个题外话，我对目前我所接受的英语教育水平有点厌烦了，请问如果我去接受PETS 2考试通过机率大吗？
再答： 我没概念 对我来说太久远了 不过你要是这篇作文连单词都没查就写出来这样的话已经比同年学生水平高出很多了