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帮忙修改英语作文（初二）
The math teacher
Mr Liu was my math teacher when I was in a primary school.He is knowledge and friendly.And very kind.
How time flies!Now I amstudying in a mdeium school.And i never have forget he.
When I became a grade six student.I was very lazy And I often forget to do my homework.One day,Mr Liu let us to pass the homework to he.But I didn't to do the homework yesterday.And the monitor was said it to Mr Liu.I was very nervous when Mr Liu was talked to me outside the classroom.He wasn't strict criticize anything .He only talked a funng store to me .And I was very regretted.
This is my favorite teacher,How great he is!
The math teacher
Mr Liu was my math teacher when I was in a primary school.He is knowledge and friendly.And very kind.
How time flies!Now I amstudying in a mdeium school.And i never have forget he.
When I became a grade six student.I was very lazy And I often forget to do my homework.One day,Mr Liu let us to pass the homework to he.But I didn't to do the homework yesterday.And the monitor was said it to Mr Liu.I was very nervous when Mr Liu was talked to me outside the classroom.He wasn't strict criticize anything .He only talked a funng store to me .And I was very regretted.
This is my favorite teacher,How great he is!
Mr Liu was my math teacher when I was in a primary school.He (was knowledgeable) and friendly.And (he was) very kind.
How time flies!Now I (study) in a (middle) school.(But I have never forgotten him).
(I was very lazy when I was a grade six student.) And I often (forgot) to do my homework.One day,Mr Liu let us ( pass) the homework to (him).But I didn't (do) the homework yesterday.And the monitor (told) it to Mr Liu.I was very nervous when Mr Liu was (talking)to me outside the classroom.He (didn't criticize me anything) .He only (only told a funny story)to me .And I was very regretted.
This is my favorite teacher,How great he is!(觉得这个结尾有点生硬,伟大应该不容易看出来吧,和蔼还差不多）
我写个结尾.
（He is my favourite teacher.How kind he is!)
我括号里的是给你改 的 想的还不错,但是语法错误还是多的,自己注意.我的供你参考呵呵.
How time flies!Now I (study) in a (middle) school.(But I have never forgotten him).
(I was very lazy when I was a grade six student.) And I often (forgot) to do my homework.One day,Mr Liu let us ( pass) the homework to (him).But I didn't (do) the homework yesterday.And the monitor (told) it to Mr Liu.I was very nervous when Mr Liu was (talking)to me outside the classroom.He (didn't criticize me anything) .He only (only told a funny story)to me .And I was very regretted.
This is my favorite teacher,How great he is!(觉得这个结尾有点生硬,伟大应该不容易看出来吧,和蔼还差不多）
我写个结尾.
（He is my favourite teacher.How kind he is!)
我括号里的是给你改 的 想的还不错,但是语法错误还是多的,自己注意.我的供你参考呵呵.