帮忙改改英语自我介绍I am very glad to be here to introduce myself.My n

帮忙改改英语自我介绍
I am very glad to be here to introduce myself.My name is Wang **,but you can also call me Wang Tao. I am 21 years old .I come from LinYin , a very beautiful city in Shandong province. I will receive my bachelor degree after my graduation in june in **University,and my major is Science of biology,whitch I am very interested in.
Generally speaking ,I am a hard working student , even though my score is not very good. In the past 4 years,I spend most of my time on study and I have passed CET6,my defects is that I haven’t pass the computer level 2 exam,but my general operation of the computer very skilled and I will try my best to study it.My classmates think that I am a smart person with self-confidence,persistence of everything.
My family always want me to become a teather,yeah,teathing is a good job,but I want to make my life colorful and I want to learn some useful knowledge in my real life. I think your school can make my dream become the truth and your school does have unique aspects in food research ,so with all my hopes and dreams I come here.
The Chinese sage Confucius has a very well-known words: “Isn’t it a delight after all to have friends come form afar.”I hope to become your best friend and student and wish my coming will take happiness to you,my dear teathers,to the students and to my new mother school------ Shaanxi University of Science & Technology.
各位大侠,我不让你们帮着写了,帮着改改总可以了吧,自己写的,禁止转录……

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I am very glad to be here to introduce myself.My name is Wang **,but you can also call me Wang Tao.I am 21 years old .I come from LinYin,a very beautiful city in Shandong province.I will receive my bachelor`s degree after my graduation from **University in june ,and my major is Science * Biology (Biomedical Sciences) ,whitch I am very interested in.
Generally speaking ,I am a hard working student ,even though my score is not very high.In the past 4 years,I had spend most of my time on study and I have passed CET6,my defect is that I haven’t passed the computer level 2 exam,but I am skilled in general operation of the computer and I will try my best to learn it.My classmates always say that I am a smart person with self-confidence and persistence .
My family always want me to become a teather.Although teathing is a good job,I want to make my life more colorful .So I want to learn some more useful knowledge in my life.I think your school can realise my dream.knowing well of your unique aspects in food research ,and with all my hopes and dreams I come here.
不要看错,以为我重复哦.全都是改好的了,噶啊嘎嘎