Beauty is more than skin deep

Beauty is more than skin deep
We hear lots of people complain about parts of their body,they keep abusing them,spending thousands of dollars doing plastic surgeries.Does that make them more beautiful?Maybe it does but beauty is more than skin deep.We are gifted with those sensory organs to communicate.The ability to communicate effectively matters more than a beautiful face.
Remember,personal charm is more than the mere possession of a beautiful face.If you want to be more attractive,you need to be armed with effective communication skills.So think about it.What is the best way to put your message across?
On the one hand,we need to be aware and attentive to the wide application and manifestation of non-verbal communication in our lives; on the other hand,there is a note of caution that we need to bear in mind.We shouldn’t be too sensitive about the signals.When people rub their nose or droop their head during the middle of the conversation,the simplest explanations are that they just cannot help it.You cannot associate them with distrust all the time.Also,the meaning of gestures or signs may also vary from culture to culture.In southern China,people tap their finger on the table to show their appreciation to the host,westerners may nevertheless took it for contempt or disrespect due to lack of knowledge.
你们觉得这篇英语短文怎么样?写 的好不好我准备拿这篇去参加演讲比赛给一点建议~

英语演讲稿的句子在没有特殊要求的情况下,应该尽量简洁,能表达清楚自己的观点就可以了.有些句子太长了,听起来不太容易跟上.
另外,如果是说理性演讲的话,最好避免用第一人称描述,“I think……”这种句子最好说成“It's well-known that……”