求段落修改及英语翻译回顾三年高中生活，除了各种社会活动能力外，我的最大收获是获得了自主学习能力、建立了高度责任感和组织能

求段落修改及英语翻译
回顾三年高中生活，除了各种社会活动能力外，我的最大收获是获得了自主学习能力、建立了高度责任感和组织能力。在学习上，数学不但是我的学科，同时在父母的影响下，我也把它看作是自己的爱好，小学和初中参加过很多培训和竞赛。有了数学的基础，加上爱好实践活动，物理也就自然而然成为自己的相对强项。生活中我很重视情商，能够迅速适应新环境，处理好人际关系，高中时期我还担任过体育委员、校学生会成员，拥有较强的组织能力。也许是因为在努力学习之余一直不忘综合发展，导致我高三时进入高考状态太晚，在去年的高考中，没能实现自己的预定目标。失败对于我来说是痛苦的，但在痛苦之中，我也把它看作是自己人生的宝贵经历和财富。复读以来，除去回顾以往知识，我还利用了更多的时间更加深入地分析问题，寻找知识的本质内容，并有所延伸。这使我对知识有了更深的理解，自学能力也得到了前所未有的提高。乔布斯在斯坦福的毕业演讲中曾说“Stay hungry, stay foolish”（求知若饥，虚心若愚）。经过一年的努力，面对成与败，对于这句话又有了更深的理解：成功之时，不忘未成功之事，失败时，也不可放弃自己的坚持，虚心自省，保持恒心，做个追求完美的人，不求收获，但问耕耘。面对进步，我不再像以往那样沾沾自喜，而面对各种各样的困难时，我也总能以坚韧的意志找到解决办法。按父亲对我的评价：“胜不骄、败不馁，你终于成熟了。”
The self-control, high sense of responsibility, strong organization ability is what I acquired besides extensive social skills from my 3 years high school life. Mathematics is my hobby even more than my subject. Affected by my parents, I had attended many trainings and competitions before high school. Upon this, my physics becomes my strong subject naturally.Emotional quotient is very important to me in my life, which can help me adapt to the new environment rapidly and have very good relationship with others. Additionally, I have also been commissary in charge of sports, membership of school student union which practiced my organizing ability.
我需要的是对中文进行一定的修改，并意译为英文。
不要字对字的直译。

回顾三年高中生活，除了各种社会活动能力外，我的最大收获是获得了自主学习能力、建立了高度责任感和组织能力。在学习上，数学不但是我的学科，同时在父母的影响下，我也把它看作是自己的爱好，小学和初中参加过很多培训和竞赛。有了数学的基础，加上爱好实践活动，物理也就自然而然成为自己的相对强项。生活中我很重视情商，能够迅速适应新环境，处理好人际关系，高中时期我还担任过体育委员、 校学生会成员，拥有较强的组织能力。


也许是因为在努力学习之余一直不忘综合发展，导致我高三时进入高考状态太晚，在去年的高考中，没能实现自己的预定目标。失败对于我来说是痛苦的，但在痛苦之中，我也把它看作是自己人生的宝贵经历和财富。复读以来，除去回顾以往知识，我还利用了更多的时间更加深入地分析问题，寻找知识的本质内容，并有所延伸。这使我对知识有了更深的理解，自学能力也得到了前

所未有的提高。乔布斯在斯坦福的毕业演讲中曾说“Stay hungry, stay foolish”（求知若饥，虚心若愚）。经过一年的努力，面对成与败，对于这句话又有了更深的理成功之时，不忘未成功之事，失败时，也不可放弃自己的坚持，虚心自省，保持恒心，做个追求完美的人，不求收获，但问耕耘。面对进步，我不再像以往那样沾沾自喜，而面对各种各样的困难时，我也总能以坚韧的意志找到解决办法。按父亲对我的评价：“胜不骄、败不馁，你终于成熟了。”

In retrospect of three years of my life of senior high school , all kind of social activities were excepted ,what I have obtained most was the acquisition of self-determined learning capability and establishment of the sense of high responsibility . In terms of learning, mathematics was not only what I was much interested in, influenced by my parents ,I had regarded it as my hobby .Having participated in many training and competition during the primary school and junior high school with the advantage of excellent mathematics foundation and preference of social practical activities .I have been so natural to be so strong in the subject of physics .
In aspect of life .I laid an emphasis upon emotional quotient and possessed the ability to adapt myself to the new environment and deal with interpersonal relationship .during the period of my senior high school .I served as commissary in charge of sports and member of student’s union of school and possessed the stronger organizational capability . perhaps it was because the reason that I have never forgotten the comprehensive development of myself that I was made to be too late to be ready for the condition to attend the college entrance examination .I have failed to achieve my own expected goal in the college entrance examination that took place last year .failure was a distress / pain to me .meanwhile, I have regarded it as precious experience and wealth in my life . During studying at the school again / during resuming my former studies in the school ,apart from the retrospect of the knowledge I have studied previously ,I have utilized more time to make deeper analysis of the problems and searched for essential contents and obtained a bit of stretch of knowledge ,which had enabled me to have a more profound understanding upon knowledge and my ability to study through self-taught means has acquired an unprecedented improvement .
Steve Paul Jobs once said in his speech of graduation “ stay hungry ,stay foolish”
Undergoing one year of effort and facing the success and failure .I’ve acquired one profound comprehension upon this word : Don’t forget the unsuccessful things when you are successful , don’t give up your own insistence when you suffer from one failure , To be modest and self-examination and keep eternality and perseverance to be a person who seeks perfection ,It is not to get harvest but plough and weed /cultivation. Facing the progress ,I will not be so happy as what I used to be . Confronted with various difficulties ,I will always find the solution with my firm and tenacious willpower , according to what my father has appraised me “Don’t be conceited with success ,nor be discouraged by failure “ /Don’t get conceited because of your victory , nor get disheartened in case of defeat .you eventually have got mature

关于最后一句话，有好几个翻译版本
（1）Don’t be conceited with success, nor discouraged by failure
(2) Don’t get conceited in face of victory ,nor disheartened in case of defeat
(3) Don’t be proud in the presence of victory ,nor dismayed in face of defeat
(4)Don’t be puffed when you obtain success ,nor be you suffering from one failure
(5) Don’t be dizzy when you win, Don’t be downhearted when you fail

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