高分征集一篇英语作文what we will learn through college years提纲1.有人说上大学

高分征集一篇英语作文
what we will learn through college years
提纲1.有人说上大学重要的是学知识
2.也有人认为掌握获取知识的能力更重要
3.我认为要学会独立,培养责任感等（展开说明）
PS.这是我大学第一篇作文,别给我写的太简单,用语一定要复杂,高端语法.

What we will learn through college years
In China,college will be regard as heaven.For undergraduates have little homework and much freedom.Besides,the interesting and colourful life never make them feel boring.In this case,more and more critics feel anxious about morden undergraduates,they argue that as a promising beam of our country should concentrate on acquiring knowledge rather than taking various aimless activities such as taking,wondering.There is one words never fail to describe anyone:No pains,no gains.However someone else think that the ability of acquiring knowledge is more important.In their opinion,only armed with the strong ability of acquiring knowledge,we will learn something more efficient ,besides,when we meet a new object we can be familiar with it quickly.
In my opinion,college is a place with few restrict,we must be strict to ourselves.First of all,we must learn to be more independant,which had been asked when we were little,for we have been far from our comfortable home,and kind parents.We must learn to be communicate with someone else we have not meet before,and behavior a gentleman,saddly but firmly we must do odd jobs all by ourslves.
Responsibilty is another character we must acquire through college years.Human are emotional,your responsibility will make your future more brighter.While,your irresponsible must heart somebodies who rely on you deeply feelings totally.So we must stick to be responsibility for everyone and everything.
In a word,college is a magical place,which can change one from humble to noble,when you learn by heart and with apparent direction.
如果加上第一第二什么的,层次应该会更清了,不过写一篇不容易太累了,就这了,如果觉得不妥,你还可以自行分段.希望指正错误.