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书面表达友谊

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老师这是我写的关于友谊的一篇作文 我希望您能帮我在里面修改 并且可以出现 初二下半学期所学过的语法 宾语从句 并列复合句 现在完成时
书面表达友谊
解题思路: 同学你好,你写的短文已经包含了下面所提的要求,比如现在完成时,从句的使用,虽然有些地方不恰当,但是能敢于学以致用,就是好的,老师很赞成你的这种学习态度!加油!
解题过程:
My friendship I have a best friend .We have been friends for ten years .She is tall and thin , She is very beautiful .She likes playing computer games very much . She always plays QQ games . One day , when I was doing my homework ,she called me .She asked me to play QQ games with her . But I couldn't play .When I finished my homework , She taught me how to play it . I hope we will be good friends for ever .