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假设你和几位同学成立了一个英语俱乐部，开展为期两个月的活动。现在，你将代表俱乐部在课堂上进行经验交流，请写一篇英语发言稿，主要内容如下： 1.简要描述俱乐部开展的一项与英语有关的主要活动; 2.谈谈你们开展该活动的收获。 注意： 1.词数不少于120个; 2.不能使用真实姓名和学校姓名 Hello,ladies and gentlme.I"m very glad to stand here to give you a short talk about our English club. Renently,you may find there are nearly nobody in our club. This is because we organized a activity with Primary school students.We taught them by singing english songs,and telling english stories is also one of the projects.In a word What we try our best to do is arousing their interets to English. Through this activity Not only we can enrich our english knowledge.But also can we realize the importance of patience to english study.As we all know.rome wasn"t built in a day.Learning english is also the process of accumulating knowledge.when we speaking and writing english phrases.we also improve our own ability at the same time.Last but not the least,we get kids' smiling and admire in return.That what we are not able to buy with money. Thank you for lishtening to me.That's all. 请老师帮忙批改，指出本文错误的语言点和用词不当处。并从严打分（满分30） 谢谢老师
解题思路： 注意结构
解题过程：
写的较好，结构较清晰，25分，下面是修改后的文章，请查看一下
Hello, ladies and gentlemen. I"m very glad to stand here to give you a short talk about our English club. Renently, you may find there are nearly nobody in our club. This is because we organized an activity with Primary school students. We taught them by singing English songs,and telling English stories is also one of the projects. In a word , what we try our best to do is to arouse their interests in English. Through this activity ,not only can we enrich our English knowledge but also we can realize the importance of patience of English study. As we all know,Rome wasn"t built in a day. Learning English is also the process of accumulating knowledge.When we speak and write English phrases, we can also improve our own ability at the same time. Last but not least, we get kids' smiling and admire in return that we are not able to buy with money. Thank you for listening to me. That's all.
最终答案：略
解题过程：
写的较好，结构较清晰，25分，下面是修改后的文章，请查看一下
Hello, ladies and gentlemen. I"m very glad to stand here to give you a short talk about our English club. Renently, you may find there are nearly nobody in our club. This is because we organized an activity with Primary school students. We taught them by singing English songs,and telling English stories is also one of the projects. In a word , what we try our best to do is to arouse their interests in English. Through this activity ,not only can we enrich our English knowledge but also we can realize the importance of patience of English study. As we all know,Rome wasn"t built in a day. Learning English is also the process of accumulating knowledge.When we speak and write English phrases, we can also improve our own ability at the same time. Last but not least, we get kids' smiling and admire in return that we are not able to buy with money. Thank you for listening to me. That's all.
最终答案：略