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I am a middle school student. I learn many subjects at school. After class, my classmates and I often take part indifferent school activities. I am interested in computer science and I often go to our school computer group. I learn to get useful things from Internrt. I think it is important to learn to use computers because they are used everywhere in our modern life. Iwantwork for our country with computers when I grow up
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I am a middle school student. I learn many subjects at school. After class, my classmates and I often take part in different school activities. I am interested in computer science and I often go to our school computer group. I learn to get useful things from Internet. I think it is important for us to learn how to use computers because they are used everywhere in our modern life. I want to work for our country with computers when I grow up . I am sure my dream will come true if I work hard .
这篇作文整体上写得不错。内容完整，叙述流畅，使用多种语法结构和丰富的词汇，语言通顺，语意连贯，具有逻辑性。红体字部分是老师认为应该添加和补充的地方，仅供参考。
最终答案：略
解题过程：
I am a middle school student. I learn many subjects at school. After class, my classmates and I often take part in different school activities. I am interested in computer science and I often go to our school computer group. I learn to get useful things from Internet. I think it is important for us to learn how to use computers because they are used everywhere in our modern life. I want to work for our country with computers when I grow up . I am sure my dream will come true if I work hard .
这篇作文整体上写得不错。内容完整，叙述流畅，使用多种语法结构和丰富的词汇，语言通顺，语意连贯，具有逻辑性。红体字部分是老师认为应该添加和补充的地方，仅供参考。
最终答案：略