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指出语法之类的错误,再提出能改进、增添、删减的地方~
（作文要求：写一篇描写自己家乡的文章）（我的家乡是Guangzhou）
Do you know where my hometown is?Guess!Well,my hometown is in Guangzhou.Guangzhou is a first-tier city,it lies in thesouth of China.It’s a large city with a population of over 13,000,000.
There’re lots of local snacks in Guangzhou,such asWontonnoodles and Radish beef offal.If you come here,you should have try,and you’ll like it.It’s delicious.Besides,there’re also many places of interest.You can not only go and visitthe historical spots,but also modern buildings,Canton Toweris the best choice.You can see the great view of Guangzhouon the cable car of Canton Tower,that’s fantastic.
In Guangzhou,the winters are cold,though itwon’t snow.But it can be burning hot during the summer in Guangzhou.
Guangzhou is a city withconvenient transportation both on land and water.You can travel in Guangzhou in any ways,because it has dozens of railways,roads and so on.
So,come toGuangzhou andenjoy yourself!
另外,本来我想在文章中添加【我对广州恒大】的热爱与支持,后来又觉得有点跑题.
（注：这里的【广州恒大】指足球队）
（作文要求：写一篇描写自己家乡的文章）（我的家乡是Guangzhou）
Do you know where my hometown is?Guess!Well,my hometown is in Guangzhou.Guangzhou is a first-tier city,it lies in thesouth of China.It’s a large city with a population of over 13,000,000.
There’re lots of local snacks in Guangzhou,such asWontonnoodles and Radish beef offal.If you come here,you should have try,and you’ll like it.It’s delicious.Besides,there’re also many places of interest.You can not only go and visitthe historical spots,but also modern buildings,Canton Toweris the best choice.You can see the great view of Guangzhouon the cable car of Canton Tower,that’s fantastic.
In Guangzhou,the winters are cold,though itwon’t snow.But it can be burning hot during the summer in Guangzhou.
Guangzhou is a city withconvenient transportation both on land and water.You can travel in Guangzhou in any ways,because it has dozens of railways,roads and so on.
So,come toGuangzhou andenjoy yourself!
另外,本来我想在文章中添加【我对广州恒大】的热爱与支持,后来又觉得有点跑题.
（注：这里的【广州恒大】指足球队）
you should have try,--> you should have a try
the winters are cold --> 不用复数把,winter is cold
可以加广州恒大啊,但不要说太多,说两三句就可以了呵呵
the winters are cold --> 不用复数把,winter is cold
可以加广州恒大啊,但不要说太多,说两三句就可以了呵呵
求汉译英请大神帮忙看看译文有什么语法错误或需要增加或删减的地方,着重在于修改译文语法和语句错误就好!WindWill,1
请帮忙指出：错误的地方、语法、重点句型以及建议.
改正句子错误的地方,并指出
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看看有没有语法之类的错误
看看英语句子有无错误,或可以改进的地方?
几篇英语小短文,希望英语好的能帮忙检查一下语法上的错误修改一下,可以适当增添发挥一些.谢谢!
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请英语达人来点评一下这篇作文,这是一篇高中生作文,要纠正一下语法或拼写错误,并写出需要改进的地方
在你提出意见后,别人会指出你的错误并提出自己的观点,但你自己想不出反驳的地方而且认为他是对的