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It was a fine day.I and my friends went to visited the Great Wall .It was very fantastic when we saw the Great Wall .First we taken some photos and then climbed the Great Wall ,it was tired but happy.Next we ate Beijing Roasted Duck for dinner.it was very deliciuos.There were many peole,especially foreigners and the boss was very friendly to customer.At 5:00 Pm.We went back home.
看看这篇英语日记有何修改之处,
It was a fine day.My friends and I went to visit the Great Wall.It was really fantastic the moment we saw it.First,we took some photos and then climbed the Great Wall.Besides,we had Bejing Roasted Duck for dinner and we all felt it was delicious.There were many people,especially foreigners and the boss was very friendly to customers.Finally,tired but happy,we went back home at 5:00p.m.
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