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初学英语,每周一篇书面表达．请求改错!6
Today have solar eclipse.I'm planning to watch it.In 8:00 We having english class.We are very excite.So not attend to class.
Our theater feel us mind.He let us go out to watch solar eclipse.
In our place olny watch half solar eclipse.But the sky also at dark.Everyone think is beautiful!From where i stand ,i think
people interesting in science is good thing.
Today have solar eclipse.I'm planning to watch it.In 8:00 We having english class.We are very excite.So not attend to class.
Our theater feel us mind.He let us go out to watch solar eclipse.
In our place olny watch half solar eclipse.But the sky also at dark.Everyone think is beautiful!From where i stand ,i think
people interesting in science is good thing.
第一句就错了,It has solar eclipse today. 或者 Today, it has solar eclipse.
第二句： I was planning to watch it.
At 8:00, we were having English class.
We were every excited. (注意excited）
So we were not attend the class.
Our teacher knew what we were thinking about. He let us go out to watch it.
In our place we can only watch ...
The sky was still so dark.
Everyone thought it was beautiful.
I think it is a good thing that people are interested in science.
没明白你这句是什么意思"From where I stand"
总体来讲,你几乎总是不写主语.
第二句： I was planning to watch it.
At 8:00, we were having English class.
We were every excited. (注意excited）
So we were not attend the class.
Our teacher knew what we were thinking about. He let us go out to watch it.
In our place we can only watch ...
The sky was still so dark.
Everyone thought it was beautiful.
I think it is a good thing that people are interested in science.
没明白你这句是什么意思"From where I stand"
总体来讲,你几乎总是不写主语.