1.my Summer Holiday,2.My hobbies,每个8句,

1.my Summer Holiday,2.My hobbies,每个8句,
不好意思，没说清楚，还需要解释\(^o^)/~

This summer holiday I plan to go to the beach.I will go there with my parents and cousins.We'll stay there for three days at the local hotel.The trip will be the most wonderful one that I have ever had.Because we will do a lot of things there,such as playing volleyball ,windsurfing ,having barbecue at night.I'm really looking foward to it.
再问： 请问能有解释吗？
再答： 这个暑假我计划去海边玩。我要去我的父母和我的堂兄。我们将在那里呆三天在当地的旅馆。这次旅行将是最快乐,我有过。因为我们要做的事很多,就如打排球,晚上帆板运动、烧烤。我真很期待. 你可以自己适当修改 2 Do you have any hobbies? If not ,what do you do in the holidays ? I have many hobbies .On weekdays ,when I study in school ,I play with my classmates .Sometimes I play volleyball with them,sometimes I play football with them .I think playing football is very interesting and exciting .But when I get home ,I like listening to music alone .Also I like reading story books.When I am not happy about something ,I usually draw some pictures though I am not good at drawing .On weekends ,there is no class ,I like shopping with my friends and my parents . 你有什么爱好吗?如果不是,你会做些什么假日?我有很多爱好。平时,当我在学校学习,我和同学们一起玩。有时候我打排球,有时我踢足球。我想跟他们踢足球很有意思也很令人兴奋,但是当我到家的时候,我喜欢听音乐本身简介我喜欢读故事书。当我不喜欢某样东西的时候,我通常会画一些画虽然我不擅于绘画。周末,不用上课,我喜欢购物,跟我的朋友和我的父母。