搜搜做题作业网smoke 的短文改错
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smoke 的短文改错
As we all konw it ,smoking is very harmful to our health.For us teenagers it does greatly harm not only to our healthbut also to our mind.Now more and more peoples begin to realize its harm.Many people over the world had given upsmoking.So some middle school students have formed thebad habit of smoking.It's bad for their health and study.we middle school students are the future builder of ourcountry.We should work moer hard and learn somethinguseful for our country,the people and ourselves,either.It's time for them get rid of the bad habit of smoking.每行都有一个错
As we all konw it ,smoking is very harmful to our health.For us teenagers it does greatly harm not only to our healthbut also to our mind.Now more and more peoples begin to realize its harm.Many people over the world had given upsmoking.So some middle school students have formed thebad habit of smoking.It's bad for their health and study.we middle school students are the future builder of ourcountry.We should work moer hard and learn somethinguseful for our country,the people and ourselves,either.It's time for them get rid of the bad habit of smoking.每行都有一个错
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As we all konw (去掉it),smoking is very harmful to our health.For us teenagers it does (great) harm not only to our health but also to our mind.Now more and more (people) begin to realize its harm.Many people over the world (have) given up smoking.(But) some middle school students have formed (a) bad habit of smoking.It's bad for their health and study.We middle school students are the future (builders) of our country.We should work (去掉more) hard and learn something useful for our country,the people and ourselves,(too).It's time for (us) get rid of the bad habit of smoking.
As we all konw (去掉it),smoking is very harmful to our health.For us teenagers it does (great) harm not only to our health but also to our mind.Now more and more (people) begin to realize its harm.Many people over the world (have) given up smoking.(But) some middle school students have formed (a) bad habit of smoking.It's bad for their health and study.We middle school students are the future (builders) of our country.We should work (去掉more) hard and learn something useful for our country,the people and ourselves,(too).It's time for (us) get rid of the bad habit of smoking.