修改一篇英语..急老手们,需要把下面的作文修改成 小学四年级的水平（水平不要太高了）...the InternetInt

修改一篇英语..急
老手们,需要把下面的作文修改成 小学四年级的水平（水平不要太高了）...
the Internet
Internet is very useful for us.the Internet is a GREat facility for collecting information.the Internet makes it easy to build social connections.we can have a lot of friends all over the world and reach much knowledge by Internet.Millions of people communicate today through E-mail.
But the disadvantages of Internet also have a lot.the network information may be falsehood,so mach as leading to a wrong decision-making.May online socialization weaken our ability to deal with relationships in the real world?the weak-willed persons maybe indulge network-game and amusement in Internet thereby disrepair own career.
the loveliness of Internet is infinitude and colorful,but strengthen to manage it.We make good use of it only while we have an appropriate approach to Internet .
2.What do you think of?
the internet play a very important role in our daylife.Everyday thousands people surf the net.With the help of the net you can get many useful imformations,you can make friends with different people who are known or unkown,you can ask the help or question the answer.
Every coin has two sides,there are so much rubbish on the net,which are some medium messageses about crime or sex.Morever the cost is large,which also make peopl waste time on it.
It’s abilities should used by people.We should correctly take the advantage of the net,make our life more beautiful.

不知道这样行不行...我觉得小学四年级写不出这样的文...起码我当时写不出,不知道现在的小学生有没有学到复杂句什么的...语法方面学到什么程度了...
The Internet
Internet is very useful for us.Internet is a great facility for collecting information.Internet makes it easy to build social connections.we can have a lot of friends all over the world and reach much knowledge by Internet.Millions of people communicate today through E-mail.
But there are a lot of disadvantages of Internet.The information may be wrong,so it will lead to a wrong decision-making.It will weaken our ability to deal with relationships in the real world.Some people maybe indulge games and amusement in Internet thereby disrepair own career.
the loveliness of Internet is colorful,but strengthen to manage it.We make good use of it only while we have an appropriate approach to Internet .
2.What do you think of?
Internet plays a very important role in our daylife.Thousands of people surf the net everyday.With the help of the net you can get many useful imformation,you can make friends with different people,and you can ask for the help.
Every coin has two sides.There are so much rubbish on the net,including messageses about crime or sex.Morever the cost is large,which also make people waste time on it.
Its abilities should used by people.We should take the advantages of the net properly,and make our life more beautiful.