搜搜做题作业网【no：2】整理的以前的句子.请大家最后检查一遍有没有语序和用词的差错,
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【no：2】整理的以前的句子.请大家最后检查一遍有没有语序和用词的差错,
①We have different ways to express a same idea ②Tom was upset with a trouble,and his upset run disappeared after he learned using different methods to settle trouble ③If you want to master the English,you must spend more time and energy in learning it,otherwise you won't progress ④profession moral is the action of rules which people must obey when people are working ⑤Understanding changeful professional can help us understand development trend of the future profession ⑥Developing a good professional quality can shape us stable psychological ⑤So,we must understand what we need,then to adopt different methods to get our aim at lowest price ⑦Mr.drain（迪兰）have shown his intelligence in the aspects,which is the perfect interpretation to the Mr smith‘s spirit ⑧Don't mind what people say,only to do the things that you like⑨some of the poor do not know how poor they are
①We have different ways to express a same idea ②Tom was upset with a trouble,and his upset run disappeared after he learned using different methods to settle trouble ③If you want to master the English,you must spend more time and energy in learning it,otherwise you won't progress ④profession moral is the action of rules which people must obey when people are working ⑤Understanding changeful professional can help us understand development trend of the future profession ⑥Developing a good professional quality can shape us stable psychological ⑤So,we must understand what we need,then to adopt different methods to get our aim at lowest price ⑦Mr.drain（迪兰）have shown his intelligence in the aspects,which is the perfect interpretation to the Mr smith‘s spirit ⑧Don't mind what people say,only to do the things that you like⑨some of the poor do not know how poor they are
一里面 a 改成 the ,idea 不太好 改成 opinion.二里面run 去掉 三里面the English 改成 English 六里面 a 去掉 八 only 改成 just
再问： 请问按您这样改就对了？
再答： 感觉通篇都比较中式 实在不知该如何细改啊 只能把比较明显的几个标出来了
再问： 请问按您这样改就对了？
再答： 感觉通篇都比较中式 实在不知该如何细改啊 只能把比较明显的几个标出来了