看看英文文章?The Star ZooI read a book in this week.The book calle

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The Star Zoo
I read a book in this week.The book called The Star Zoo.Before reading,I think this book is a science fiction animal novel.After reading,I know this book isn’t animal novel.
This book tells me a story:In the 22500 years,the humans polluted the earth.Many animals die.But the human runs away to another planet.The planet is “Just Like Home”.The human is very lonely and sad.
One night,a lovely girl,called Hummingbird.She is joining Remembering Night.Then the worst thing in her life happened.The man is comes up to her.The man called Buff.The man wants to marry Hummingbird.But Hummingbird doesn’t marry him.He is an old man.Then,Hummingbird runs away to a mystical place.She is going into a planet.She sees a big tree and some monsters.She is afraid.But some monsters are very good.But she stills hate them.
She waiting for 15000 years,she sees a computer.The computer saws “animals take care of you.” She was very afraid.The computer tells her “there is the star zoo.” Then,the computer tells her many things.
She goes home.But nobody believes her.Afterward,a robot can do many different things.Then they made many animals.But an animal die.They are sad.
After I read,I know,humans the most complexity,we can speak,we can use implement,we can make machines…… But animals are our friends.We aren’t injure them.The ecosphere isn’t breakage.We destroy the ecosphere and then very hard renovate.We mustn’t fell many tree,we must protect them.I want the earth is good all the time.
At this time,many animals is die,we are attach importance to them.Can’t let them disappear.
Animals eat plants,and the human eat vegetable and animals.Human eat many female,they aren’t give birth to many baby.The resource is limited in the earth.We are economy.
At this time,the earth begins become warmer.Many plants are withering.A lot of monoxide is in the air,now.The humans and animals are not enough fresh air.Those airs to our body are harmful.So we must decrease monoxide.
I think the humans are cleverness is excess.Many people has strange ideal.Such as kill animals,then take them in a market; cut of many trees,then play them……
We safeguard animals and trees,safeguard us,too.We want not lonely and sad.We want happy with animals.They are mansuetude,but them hardly angry.They are very lovely.
I want all the animals in this world,so I want not leave to another planet.Earth is very beautiful.I like my home.If no any animals in the world,I want make many animals accompany with us.
The animals want make friends with humans.But humans kill them.Facing the world,to be or not to be,it’s up to you.We must make a choice without any hesitation!

头一段没有一句是正确的……不想再看下去了……
指出一下头一段好了
第一句 in 去掉
第二句 called 前加 is
第三句 animal前加about,或on(语气严肃,不推荐),animal变复数,novel去了
第四句 最简单的办法是animal前加an……或a novel about animals
受不了了……语言不地道,很难改的……
建议再看一本语法书