求英语较好的人帮忙看下文章有没有出错点.
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求英语较好的人帮忙看下文章有没有出错点.
老师要求话剧,于是我写了一篇关于TFBoys英语短文.怕会有出错点,希望如果有出错可以帮忙纠正.【真的只是七年级水平啊.不要用百度翻译帮我检查~】
about starchaser.关于追星
A:Good afternoon.下午好
B:Thank you.I'm fine.What about you 我很好,你呢?
A:I'm OK Hey?What is that in your hand 我很好,你手里拿的是什么?
B:Oh,it is a postcard about TFBoys.是关于TFBoys的明信片.
A:TFBoys That great teen idol group?TFBoys?是那个现在挺火的少年组合么?
B:Yeah.I love them very much.What about you?嗯嗯,我很爱他们,你呢?
A:Enn……not bad.恩……还不错吧.
B:Well.Which star do you like?喔喔,你喜欢哪个明星?
A:I'm not starchaser.I worry about the effects of learning.Don't you worry about it
我不追星,我担心那会影响到我的学习,难道你不担心吗?
B:I don't worry about.I'll take them as the example.I believe this will promote the grouth of my.
我不担心啊.我会以他们作为我的榜样,而且我相信这会促进我的成长.
A:I believe you.我相信你.
老师要求话剧,于是我写了一篇关于TFBoys英语短文.怕会有出错点,希望如果有出错可以帮忙纠正.【真的只是七年级水平啊.不要用百度翻译帮我检查~】
about starchaser.关于追星
A:Good afternoon.下午好
B:Thank you.I'm fine.What about you 我很好,你呢?
A:I'm OK Hey?What is that in your hand 我很好,你手里拿的是什么?
B:Oh,it is a postcard about TFBoys.是关于TFBoys的明信片.
A:TFBoys That great teen idol group?TFBoys?是那个现在挺火的少年组合么?
B:Yeah.I love them very much.What about you?嗯嗯,我很爱他们,你呢?
A:Enn……not bad.恩……还不错吧.
B:Well.Which star do you like?喔喔,你喜欢哪个明星?
A:I'm not starchaser.I worry about the effects of learning.Don't you worry about it
我不追星,我担心那会影响到我的学习,难道你不担心吗?
B:I don't worry about.I'll take them as the example.I believe this will promote the grouth of my.
我不担心啊.我会以他们作为我的榜样,而且我相信这会促进我的成长.
A:I believe you.我相信你.
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What about you ? 谢谢.我很好,你呢? 改为How about you?
What is that in your hand that可以去掉,不过保留也不影响
What about you? 嗯嗯,我很爱他们,你呢? 改为How about you?
I worry about the effects of learning i worry about it may have negative(负面) effects on my study. 你这样翻译,直译就是我担心我的学习效果.而不是会影响我的学习.
I don't worry about+it, 或者改为I don't care.
I'll take them as the example. I believe this will promote the grouth(改为my growth).
I belive (in) you 一般信任某人要用这个短语.
我认真修改完了,希望对你有所帮助哦~
What is that in your hand that可以去掉,不过保留也不影响
What about you? 嗯嗯,我很爱他们,你呢? 改为How about you?
I worry about the effects of learning i worry about it may have negative(负面) effects on my study. 你这样翻译,直译就是我担心我的学习效果.而不是会影响我的学习.
I don't worry about+it, 或者改为I don't care.
I'll take them as the example. I believe this will promote the grouth(改为my growth).
I belive (in) you 一般信任某人要用这个短语.
我认真修改完了,希望对你有所帮助哦~