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I am a student class 1 senior 3 Tow days ago,we have a discussion about LeiFeng. we decided to heip older. The day we come on the senior citizens home Some students talk with older they got on well with the older Some students clean the floor ang window While the other reached the older soeak Englishi The evening ,we held a music center MANYstudents songde 有什么错误 月考作文 总体时态为过去时
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解题过程：
你好，答疑如下：
I am a student class 1 senior 3 Tow days ago,we have a discussion about LeiFeng. we decided to heip older. The day we come on the senior citizens home Some students talk with older they got on well with the older Some students clean the floor ang window While the other reached the older soeak Englishi The evening ,we held a music center MANYstudents songde
错误有：单词拼写；时态，词语搭配；句子结构，大小写，标点，衔接等。
改后：
I am a student in Class 1 ，Senior 3. Two days ago,we had a discussion about LeiFeng. So we decided to heip the old. The next day we came to the senior citizens‘ homes Some students talked and got on well with the old. Some students cleaned the floor ang windows. While others helped the old speak English. In the evening ,we held a music party. Many students sang songs.
愿你满意。异议来电。
最终答案：略
解题过程：
你好，答疑如下：
I am a student class 1 senior 3 Tow days ago,we have a discussion about LeiFeng. we decided to heip older. The day we come on the senior citizens home Some students talk with older they got on well with the older Some students clean the floor ang window While the other reached the older soeak Englishi The evening ,we held a music center MANYstudents songde
错误有：单词拼写；时态，词语搭配；句子结构，大小写，标点，衔接等。
改后：
I am a student in Class 1 ，Senior 3. Two days ago,we had a discussion about LeiFeng. So we decided to heip the old. The next day we came to the senior citizens‘ homes Some students talked and got on well with the old. Some students cleaned the floor ang windows. While others helped the old speak English. In the evening ,we held a music party. Many students sang songs.
愿你满意。异议来电。
最终答案：略