搜搜做题作业网高一英语……精英请进……
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高一英语……精英请进……
大家帮忙看看我写的这篇作文,有什么不恰当的地方竟帮忙指出来……谢谢……
Dear Sarah,
Thank you for your letter asking about the rebuilt Qianmen Street.Here is something about it.(这是题目给的 没错误）
The rebuilt Qianmen Street is more than 800meterswith more than 600 years history.There are more than 300 shops here as well as.(此处的as well as用的合适么?顺便讲一下as well as 与as well 的区别以及用法,谢谢……）
It stands to the south of Tian'anmen square.If you want to visit there.you can take buses No.17,69,and 59.Besides,you can also take the subway Line2.(第二句visit there对么?visit in there可以么?还有最后一句的是can also 还是also can,为什么?）
There are some special things all around Qianmen Street.such as,pedestrian streer,trolley car,teahouseand theatre,etc.this is the spot which is worth of traveling.(第一句本来想写in Qianmen Street,可是答案给的是all around.用in可以么?all around在此作何解释?all around怎么用?最后一句话用的定语从句,有没有什么语法错误?请指教……）
So beautiful a spot,do you like it?(此句so beautiful a spot 写的对么?）
谢谢各位了……如有不当之处还请多指教……
大家帮忙看看我写的这篇作文,有什么不恰当的地方竟帮忙指出来……谢谢……
Dear Sarah,
Thank you for your letter asking about the rebuilt Qianmen Street.Here is something about it.(这是题目给的 没错误）
The rebuilt Qianmen Street is more than 800meterswith more than 600 years history.There are more than 300 shops here as well as.(此处的as well as用的合适么?顺便讲一下as well as 与as well 的区别以及用法,谢谢……）
It stands to the south of Tian'anmen square.If you want to visit there.you can take buses No.17,69,and 59.Besides,you can also take the subway Line2.(第二句visit there对么?visit in there可以么?还有最后一句的是can also 还是also can,为什么?）
There are some special things all around Qianmen Street.such as,pedestrian streer,trolley car,teahouseand theatre,etc.this is the spot which is worth of traveling.(第一句本来想写in Qianmen Street,可是答案给的是all around.用in可以么?all around在此作何解释?all around怎么用?最后一句话用的定语从句,有没有什么语法错误?请指教……）
So beautiful a spot,do you like it?(此句so beautiful a spot 写的对么?）
谢谢各位了……如有不当之处还请多指教……
1）The rebuilt Qianmen Street is more than 800meterswith more than 600 years history.
800 meters改为 800 meters long,600 years history---> 600 years' history.由于这句话more than用了两次,第二次 more than 可以用over.
2）There are more than 300 shops here as well as.
要用as well啊.as well就相当于 and.as well as就是“和..一样”
3）第三段visit there对,visit in there 不可以.最后一句can also.因为副词also在助动词can后面.
4)倒数第二段你的景点每种有几个,如果只有一个要加a/an的,很多的都用复数.all around 可以用,周围.in就是说在前门大街里面,具体看实际情况用了.
5）最后一句 So beautiful the spot is.比较合适
800 meters改为 800 meters long,600 years history---> 600 years' history.由于这句话more than用了两次,第二次 more than 可以用over.
2）There are more than 300 shops here as well as.
要用as well啊.as well就相当于 and.as well as就是“和..一样”
3）第三段visit there对,visit in there 不可以.最后一句can also.因为副词also在助动词can后面.
4)倒数第二段你的景点每种有几个,如果只有一个要加a/an的,很多的都用复数.all around 可以用,周围.in就是说在前门大街里面,具体看实际情况用了.
5）最后一句 So beautiful the spot is.比较合适