搜搜做题作业网有没有人可以帮我修改一下自我介绍,好像有很多语病.
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有没有人可以帮我修改一下自我介绍,好像有很多语病.
This is my mother.She is beautiful,she has brown hair.She is very love us.This is my brother.He is a funny chirdren.This is my father.He looks very fat and very tall.but were young,he is very thin.This is me,I have ablack hair,look not beautiful.But I like learning,like our school.
This is my mother.She is beautiful,she has brown hair.She is very love us.This is my brother.He is a funny chirdren.This is my father.He looks very fat and very tall.but were young,he is very thin.This is me,I have ablack hair,look not beautiful.But I like learning,like our school.
He is a funny chirdren：children是复数,孩子的单数是child.此处哥哥是一个,故用单数child
but were young,：改为but when he were young 译为当他年轻的时候
,I have ablack hair：a 去掉
,look not beautiful.：改为but not very beautiful
But I like learning,like our school:but 删 our改成my更好一些 因为是自我介绍吧
如果把我选上,
but were young,：改为but when he were young 译为当他年轻的时候
,I have ablack hair：a 去掉
,look not beautiful.：改为but not very beautiful
But I like learning,like our school:but 删 our改成my更好一些 因为是自我介绍吧
如果把我选上,