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Dear Sir or Madam:
I am glad to receive your letter,I am also a student who is keen on animals.You know that many creatures are living on the earth with us which make our life more colorful and meaningful.So,we must pay more attention to them,otherwise they will be extinct forever.
Tibetan Antelope which is also known as The Hox Xil Pride is a animal which lives in the Tibetan Plateau.It’s a gregarious animal.But it’s horn and fur is also very expensive.So many hunters after killing them,peel off their skin,and pull out their horn to sell.
As a student.Despite we can’t go to stop the killing.What we can do is to appealing others not to buy the things make of the horn,or the clothes make of their fur.There is a saying that:When the buying stops,the killing can too.
I am looking forward to receive your letter about the protection plans of this animal.
Dear Sir or Madam:
I am glad to receive your letter,I am also a student who is keen on animals.You know that many creatures are living on the earth with us which make our life more colorful and meaningful.So,we must pay more attention to them,otherwise they will be extinct forever.
Tibetan Antelope which is also known as The Hox Xil Pride is a animal which lives in the Tibetan Plateau.It’s a gregarious animal.But it’s horn and fur is also very expensive.So many hunters after killing them,peel off their skin,and pull out their horn to sell.
As a student.Despite we can’t go to stop the killing.What we can do is to appealing others not to buy the things make of the horn,or the clothes make of their fur.There is a saying that:When the buying stops,the killing can too.
I am looking forward to receive your letter about the protection plans of this animal.
-你可以用There are many creatures lived on earth like us,代替 You know that many creatures are living on the earth with us
-However,their horns and furs are very valuable 代替 But it's horn...
-Therefore many hunters peel off their skin and pull out their horn after killing them 代替 So many...
-As a student,we couldn't stop the killing but what we can do are appeal others...
-There is a saying that stated:.the killing stops too
-最后一句...of animal like this.
-However,their horns and furs are very valuable 代替 But it's horn...
-Therefore many hunters peel off their skin and pull out their horn after killing them 代替 So many...
-As a student,we couldn't stop the killing but what we can do are appeal others...
-There is a saying that stated:.the killing stops too
-最后一句...of animal like this.