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请教高人帮我改下作文的病句错词,拜谢!
A good case coming to my mind now is the comic composition of the Postgraduate English Exams,2010,which describes different attitudes for the same thing---pessimism and optimism,tells us different attitudes to the life may trigger totally different outcomes.
tells us different attitudes to the life may trigger totally different outcomes.
可以换成 It is telling/to tell us different attitudes to the life may trigger totally different outcomes.
A good case coming to my mind now is the comic composition of the Postgraduate English Exams,2010,which describes different attitudes for the same thing---pessimism and optimism,tells us different attitudes to the life may trigger totally different outcomes.
tells us different attitudes to the life may trigger totally different outcomes.
可以换成 It is telling/to tell us different attitudes to the life may trigger totally different outcomes.
【已下是为您改好的段落,您完全可以换成it is to tell us的句型,而且最好换,不然原来的句子是有结构错误的.还有您for the same thing的表达明显过于中式了,您可以看一下我帮您改过之后的效果】
A good example coming to my mind now is the comic composition of the Postgraduate English Examinations 2010,which describes different attitudes towards two conflicting mindset — pessimism and optimism.It is to tell us different attitudes to the life may trigger totally different outcomes.
A good example coming to my mind now is the comic composition of the Postgraduate English Examinations 2010,which describes different attitudes towards two conflicting mindset — pessimism and optimism.It is to tell us different attitudes to the life may trigger totally different outcomes.