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英语该错:John used to be my friend a few years before.He isn't m

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英语该错:John used to be my friend a few years before.He isn't my friend any more.A few years ago he is poor.Now he's rich.When i knew him,he wore on shabby clothes ,was very thin or lived in a small flat.He rode a bicycle.He was a art student.He always said:"some day i'm going to do a great artist!" Then he met mary.She had a very rich father .John married with her.Now he wears expensive cloth ,is rather fat and lives in a huge house .He drives a fast sports car.Now he says:"Some day i'm to be Prime Minister!"Oh,well.Life is good for some people.
英语该错:John used to be my friend a few years before.He isn't m
英语该错:John used to be my friend a few years before(这里应该是ago).(But now,)He isn't my friend any more(是anymore,一个单词).A few years ago he is(was,过去时态) poor.Now he's rich.When i knew him,he wore on(把on删去,不需要) shabby clothes ,(he)was very thin or(and,不是or) lived in a small flat.He rode a(用his,因为他特定的自行车) bicycle.He was a(an) art student.He always said:"Some day I'm going to do(be或者become,do是错误的) a great artist!" Then he met Mary.She had(has,她爸没死,不是过去时) a very rich father .John married with(with去掉) her.Now he wears expensive cloth(复数clothes) ,is rather fat and lives in a huge house .He drives a fast sports car.Now he says:"Some day i'm to be (the)Prime Minister!"Oh,well.Life is (加上too,强调)good for some people.
(好了,上面有括号的地方是语法或者单词用错的,下面我把正确的已经经过修改的给你哦!^-^)
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John used to be my friend a few years ago.But now,he isn't my friend anymore.A few years ago he was poor.Now he's rich.When i knew him,he wore shabby clothes ,he was very thin and lived in a small flat.He rode his bicycle.He was an art student.He always said:"Some day I'm going to be/become a great artist!" Then he met Mary.She has a very rich father .John married her.Now he wears expensive clothes ,is rather fat and lives in a huge house .He drives a fast sports car.Now he says:"Some day i'm to be the Prime Minister!" Oh well,life is too good for some people.
以上是我自己修改的,